CRAFT STUDIO: ANGER IS ONLY A SHADOW BY ELIZABETH ACEVEDO
What I was reading:
When recommending Anger Is Only a Shadow by Elizabeth Acevedo, I mention how poetic the prose feels. That’s true, but there are also sections in verse throughout the novel. All sections in verse are in some variation of the well-known “Where I’m From” poem by George Ella Lyon with new titles like “Who I’m From,” “How I’m From,” “Where I’m At,” and “Where I’m Me”, all offering different ways to get to know the main character, Lil. This stood out to me because I so often see “Where I’m From” used in schools. Acevedo takes that familiar starting point and keeps changing it, making room for more than where a person comes from. This is a great example of taking inspiration from author’s craft and adding a new take.
Here is an example of “I Am Not From,” a poem about a wish to go back and undo mistakes.
Text:
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I Am Not From people who |
What moves I notice the author making:
- Borrowing a familiar poetry frame.
- Acevedo changes “Where I’m From” to “I Am Not From”.
- Extended metaphor.
- Fixing clocks becomes a metaphor for undoing the past.
- Using subject-specific vocabulary.
- Words connected to clocks, movement, and time: “big hand,” “turn,” “loop,” “reset,” and “unwind”
- Repetition
- When “I am not from people who can fix clocks” returns, readers understand that the speaker is thinking about regret, not clock repair.
Possibilities for Writers:
Start by reading George Ella Lyon’s original “Where I’m From” alongside Acevedo’s poem. What does each writer do with the frame? What changes when “Where I’m From” becomes “I Am Not From”?
Model changing the frame and drafting a few lines of your own. Then invite students to try:
- Choose a starting point: “Who I’m From,” “Where I’m At,” “Where I’m Me,” “I Am Not From,” or a variation of their own.
- Jot down a few memories, objects, places, or phrases that connect to it.
- Use those details to draft a short poem about themselves or a character.
- Return to an opening line near the end and see how its meaning grows.
Finish by sharing: What did you borrow, and what did you change to make the writing your own?
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