
The “Juicy” Sentence Protocol by Dr. Lily Wong Fillmore is a great strategy teachers can use to help students make sense of challenging text. In this activity, teachers pull one “juicy” sentence from a text. Through examining this one sentence, students learn to deconstruct sentences and better understand how different language features contribute to meaning. This can become a routine practice in your ELA class; one that you can use for any “stretch text”.
Here is an example of the protocol in action using a sentence from David Suzuki’s speech “30 Years of Global Warming”:
“We now are the most numerous, ubiquitous large mammal on the planet, but we are like no other animal that ever existed, because we are armed with the incredible muscle power of science and technology.”
Chunk the sentence into meaningful parts and then discuss (possible discussion points in brackets¹):
We now are
(The subject of the main clause is “We”…
Who is “we”?
“are” is a linking verb to the subject complement. )
the most numerous, ubiquitous large mammal on the planet,
(This is the subject complement…
Discuss the word “ubiquitous”, which means “present, appearing, or found everywhere”…
Discuss the word “numerous” and the -ous suffix (characterized by; of the nature of)
Alliteration: “most numerous, ubiquitous.” The repetition of the “u” sound creates a pleasing sound pattern and emphasizes the extent of human presence.
What mammal is he is referring to?
Is this an example of hyperbole?)
but we are like no other animal that ever existed,
(The main clause’s subject is “We,” and its predicate is “are like no other animal.”
“Like” is a preposition introducing the comparison.
“No other animal” is the object of the preposition “like.”
“That ever existed” is a modifier of “animal.”
Use of Parallelism: “We now are the most numerous, ubiquitous large mammal on the planet, but we are like no other animal that ever existed.” This structure creates balance and rhythm in the sentence by presenting two contrasting ideas in parallel form.)
because we are armed with the incredible muscle power of science and technology.
(The subordinate clause’s subject is “we,” and its predicate is “are armed with the incredible muscle power of science and technology.”
“Because” is a subordinating conjunction introducing the reason for the comparison.
“We are armed” is the main verb phrase of the subordinate clause. “
With” is a particle indicating the tool or instrument
“the incredible muscle power” is the direct object of the verb phrase
“of science and technology” is a modifier of “power.”
“armed with the incredible muscle power of science and technology.” This metaphor compares humans’ possession of scientific and technological advancements to being equipped with physical weaponry.
This is the opening sentence in the speech. What do you think the main thesis of his speech is going to be? )
Here are some things to look for in a “juicy” sentence:
The sentence should contain some of the following: complex noun phrases (nouns that are modified or expanded by other phrases), adverbial clauses, the use of passive voice, includes linking phrases, or introduces a metaphor.
Not every sentence is going to contain all things, nor does it need to. You just want to ensure that the sentence you choose for this protocol is complex enough to spend time discussing. It should also help you teach the skills you are focusing on in the curriculum.
Additional suggestions for implementing the “Juicy” Sentence Protocol can be found here and here. And, Dr. Wong Fillmore explains the protocol in detail in this presentation.
This protocol will give students the tools they need to make meaning in sentences that use the same syntax, grammar, and vocabulary…opening access to even the most challenging of texts. Try this tomorrow!
¹I used ChatGPT to help me chunk the sentence, label parts of speech and name the literary devices.