Margin Notes

FOCUSING ON CRAFT WITH FIRST CHAPTER FRIDAYS

Sep
26

We love the practice of introducing texts, topics, authors, and genres to students by reading the first chapter aloud. First Chapter Friday is a wonderful opportunity to end the week with reading joy. It’s also a strategy that, when planned with intention, can support most aspects of the curriculum. This post is part of a series that will introduce ideas for leveling up your First Chapter Fridays without diminishing its central purpose of engaging readers. Read the previous posts on Supporting Fluency, Vocabulary, and Word Study and Incorporating Graphic Texts.

Allison Marchetti, co-author of A Teacher’s Guide to Mentor Texts, defines craft as simply “the choices a writer makes.” Craft encompasses the intentional moves writers make to engage and impact their readers. As the Purdue Online Writing Lab reminds us, “most writing is generated out of a need to communicate with an audience thus, we might think of writing as a conversation with that audience, rather than just words on a page.”

Here are some suggestions for focusing on craft with First Chapter Fridays:

  • Think aloud to make the ways you read like a writer visible.
  • While reading, stop and model the practice of noticing and naming the writer’s craft moves.
  • Revisit portions of the text in a targeted mini-lesson. Possible areas of focus include reading like a writer, noticing and naming craft, and elements of craft to notice.
  • Invite students to close read a short passage and identify craft moves they notice. This can be open (What does it say and how does it say it?) or more directed (What do you notice about the punctuation choices in this paragraph?).
  • Follow up close reading for craft by moving students into their writer’s notebooks to practice the move or incorporate it into revision.
  • Introduce an excerpt from a text by a different writer and discuss the similarities and differences they notice.
  • Use sections of the chapter to launch a mini-craft study into a specific move such as dialogue, paragraph divisions, or incorporating technical vocabulary.
  • Use this as an invitation for students to read like writers during independent reading and share the craft moves they notice in small groups.

 

THE EYES & THE IMPOSSIBLE BY DAVE EGGERS

Sep
24

Some books surprise you in the best way. The Eyes & The Impossible by Dave Eggers is one of those books for me. When this book was announced as the winner of the Newbery Medal, I was initially surprised because it was a book I had never heard of. Immediately, I ordered a copy and I am so glad I did!

This captivating and lyrically written book is about Johannes, a free dog, who spends his days exploring the island that he lives on and reporting the goings-on to the Bison who live in an enclosure. He also has other animal friends who he talks with and shares his days. He also loves Pupusus.

One day, these strange, colourful, rectangles appear on part of the island and Johannes is entranced. So much so, that he pauses a little too long to get a closer look. From that point on, Johannes is a wanted dog…and his freedom is in peril.

Beautifully and cleverly illustrated by Shawn Harris, this book would make a wonderful read aloud for Elementary and Middle Block classrooms.

Here is the book trailer:

CRAFT STUDIO: MARI ANDREW’S EVERYTHING I LOVED IN SEPTEMBER

Sep
19

What I was reading:

Do you subscribe to Mari Andrew’s newsletters? You should. Mari Andrew, acclaimed author, illustrator, and chronicler of life’s ups and downs, invites you to join her on a journey of self-discovery, resilience, and joy.

In her newsletters, Mari shares candid reflections, heartfelt anecdotes, and beautifully illustrated insights drawn from her own experiences and observations. From navigating the complexities of love and loss to finding beauty in the everyday moments, Mari’s newsletters offer a refreshing blend of honesty, humor, and hope.

I saved pieces from her September newsletter last year that would be fun to revisit as we begin a new school year.

Text:

Oh September, you little weasel!

Instead of offering a silver platter full of crisp afternoons, moody evenings, and that mysterious temperature where it’s somehow actually appropriate to wear knee socks, you gave us a heat wave and days of downpours.

The latter resulted in the most important moment of my September: When a grocery store cashier fashioned me a rain ensemble out of garbage bags, and I walked home for 45 minutes in a hurricane feeling like the Queen of New York.

September is a teenager still trying to figure out its identity—days of hormonal angst follow days of rebellious arrogance—but we love her because she brings that rush of back-to-school cinnamon-scented adrenaline….and my birthday!

In honor of both, I went on a shopping spree for new art supplies (including the deluxe box of crayons I always wanted in 2nd grade!!) and I expect a fall full of creative play is in my future. If you need me, I’ll be on my little yellow Mari couch watching my shows, working through my very first adult coloring book, and drawing portraits of my feelings, or something to that effect.

 Craft Moves I notice:

  1. Personification: Referring to September as a “teenager still trying to figure out its identity” personifies the month, giving it human-like qualities and behaviors and referring to the month as “her”.
  2. Imagery: Descriptions like “a silver platter full of crisp afternoons” and “days of downpours” create vivid images in the reader’s mind, enhancing the sensory experience of the narrative.
  3. Humor: The use of humor is evident in phrases like “September, you little weasel!” and “feeling like the Queen of New York” when wearing a rain ensemble made of garbage bags. Humor adds a light-hearted tone to the narrative.
  4. Nostalgia: The mention of purchasing “the deluxe box of crayons I always wanted in 2nd grade” and engaging in activities like coloring and drawing portraits evoke a sense of nostalgia, tapping into childhood memories and emotions.
  5. Personal Voice: The use of phrases like “If you need me, I’ll be on my little yellow Mari couch” and “drawing portraits of my feelings, or something to that effect” gives the passage a distinct personal voice, allowing the author’s personality to shine through.

Invitations for writers:

  • Using her personification of September as a model, personify a different month or concept (like school!).
  • Write to an inanimate time period, like Mari wrote to September. What does this time represent and where can you be found in the midst of it.
  • Using the line “Instead of offering a silver platter full of crisp afternoons, moody evenings, and that mysterious temperature where it’s somehow actually appropriate to wear knee socks, you gave us a heat wave and days of downpours.”, write your own comparison of expectations vs reality.
  • What is something you always wanted when you were younger. Write about the feeling of finally getting it or the grief of it never coming to fruition.
  • Channel Mari Andrew’s vivid imagery and sensory descriptions by focusing on writing through the senses. Choose a moment from your own life or imagination and describe it using all five senses—sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell.

 

HIDDEN SYSTEMS BY DAN NOTT

Sep
17

Dan Nott defines a hidden system as “something we don’t notice until it breaks.” He explains that “when these systems are doing what they are supposed to be doing, they become so commonplace that we hardly see them.” Because we often take these systems for granted, we tend to overlook the inequalities and environmental harms they perpetuate. He used comics to create Hidden Systems: Water, Electricity, the Internet, and the Secrets Behind the Systems We Use Every Day and takes us along on his deep inquiry into three of the hidden systems we have come to rely on most.

Driven by a series of guiding questions—how do we picture the internet and what is it exactly, how do we power our world with electricity, and how do our water systems integrate with the Earth’s changing climate—this graphic nonfiction text is a detailed, informative, and highly readable exploration of the inner workings of the systems that provide our connectivity, power, and water.

Hidden Systems is filled with text features that can be incorporated into mini-lessons and craft studies. It also includes glimpses into Nott’s process for creating the book with images from his notebook that would be a fantastic addition to a process study.

 

TRY THIS TOMORROW: TEACHING VOCABULARY USING LYRICAL ANALYSIS & TAYLOR SWIFT’S THE TORTURED POETS DEPARTMENT

Sep
12

With the recent drop of The Tortured Poets Department, Taylor Swift’s lyrical genius is at an all-time high. As a resident and long-time Swiftie, many of my conversations have been around Taylor Swift and this newest album. But as I discussed all the lore surrounding Taylor, one thing kept repeatedly coming up – the vocabulary. In just one-week post-release, I have had many conversations in the group chat about what on earth “esoteric” means, or “precocious”, or “petulance” and how they add to the richness of the lyrics. Of course, as I listened, I did what any millennial with an iPhone would do when they don’t know a word, I googled them. However, this got me thinking about my students, and how I could explicitly teach vocabulary through lyrical analysis.  

Start by printing off or projecting your favourite lyrics and then listening to the song (please pre-listen as some are explicit. Clean versions are all available on YouTube or Spotify). Have students follow along with the song, while viewing the lyrics. For my example, I would use “LOML”, specifically the last chorus.  

 

“Oh, what a valiant roar 

What a bland goodbye 

The coward claimed he was a lion 

I’m combing through the braids of lies 

“I’ll never leave,” “Never mind” 

Our field of dreams engulfed in fire 

Your arson’s match, your somber eyes 

And I’ll still see it until I die 

You’re the loss of my life” 

 

Have students pick out vocabulary that they are unfamiliar with. First see if they can solve for meaning using context clue strategies. After you have allowed them to explore a little further, explicitly teach them the vocabulary words they have picked out. The ones I would have ready to use in this section would be “valiant”, “bland”, “engulfed”, “arson”, & “somber”, but you could always go wherever your students take you on this. Students could write notes using annotation strategies right beside the lyrics or create Frayer cards using these vocabulary terms in their notebooks, with the idea that they could then use as reminders and ideas for future uses of vocabulary in their writing.  

Once you have allowed students to make sense of the vocabulary in the song, have them relisten to the song to see how having a clear understanding of the vocabulary helps with their understanding of the song. This practice could be easily replicated with any of your favourite artists’ lyrics and is a sure way to engage your students who love music.  

GUEST WRITER MEGAN YOUNG-JONES RECOMMENDS WHERE THE LOCKWOOD GROWS BY OLIVA A. COLE

Sep
10

Where the Lockwood Grows by Olivia A. Cole is a riveting blend of fantasy, mystery, and social commentary that will captivate readers of all ages.

The story centers around the 12-year-old Erie, who has spent their entire lives in the town of Prine where the surrounding Lockwood keeps them safe from raging forest fires but traps them from sunlight and the stars. Cole’s writing is vivid and immersive, painting a picture of Lockwood that is both enchanting and unsettling. The author excels in creating a setting that feels alive, with a sense of history and mystery that keeps the reader engaged and eager to uncover its secrets.

One of the novel’s greatest strengths is its characters. They are well-developed and multifaceted, each with their own struggles and growth throughout the story. Erie’s journey explores themes of identity, belonging, and resilience. Cole doesn’t shy away from addressing complex issues, weaving them seamlessly into the narrative.

The plot of Where the Lockwood Grows has twists and turns that keep the reader on their toes. Cole’s ability to balance tension and revelation ensures that the story is consistently engaging. The book also explores important social themes, such as the impact of environmental degradation and the power dynamics within communities, providing thought-provoking commentary.

In summary, Oliva A. Cole’s exceptional storytelling and her ability to craft a world that feels both magical and relevant make this book a highly recommended read for fans of fantasy and socially conscious fiction alike. Whether you are looking for an enthralling escape or a narrative that prompts reflection, this novel delivers on all fronts.

NYTIMES LEARNING NETWORK WRITING CURRICULUM

Sep
05

Crafting a robust writing unit demands significant time and effort from teachers. From sourcing mentor texts to designing supportive activities and delivering mini-lessons, the process can be overwhelming. But what if all this groundwork was already laid out for you? What if your role was to seamlessly integrate a writing unit with your curriculum, engage alongside your students, and provide focused feedback? Enter the NYTimes Learning Network.

Each year the NYTimes produces 8 writing units that are free resources for educators. Here is how they describe their approach:

Our writing curriculum is both a road map for teachers and an invitation to students. For teachers, it organizes our offerings — writing prompts, mentor texts and student contests — into eight distinct units, each of which focuses on a different genre of writing that your students can find not just in The Times but in all kinds of real-world sources.

For students, it offers confirmation that they have something valuable to say, a wide range of choices about how to say it and a global audience eager to listen. Promoting student voices has always been a pillar of our site, and through the opportunities for publication woven into each unit, we want to encourage students to go beyond simply consuming media to becoming creators themselves.

Each unit:

  • Is designed for grade 6-12
  • Supports holistic planning with the end in mind
  • Provides a step-by-step guides for noticing craft moves
  • Includes writing prompts to turn into quickwrites
  • Provides daily writing practice
  • Incorporates mentor texts for mini-lessons
  • Ends with a writing contest (if you choose)

Units from 2023-24 include :

  • Documenting and Reflecting on Teenage Lives
  • The Personal Narrative
  • The Critical Review
  • Informational ‘How-To’ Writing
  • The Photo Essay
  • Argumentative Writing
  • Podcasting
  • Independent Reading & Writing

Start your planning by visiting the writing line-up here!

 

STUDENT WRITER LILY HARE RECOMMENDS GIRL IN PIECES BY KATHLEEN GLASGOW

Sep
03

“The world becomes an ocean, the ocean washes over me, the sound of water is deafening, the water drowns my heart, my panic becomes as large as planets. I need release, I need to hurt myself more than the world can hurt me, and then I can comfort myself.”  

Girl in Pieces depicts a beautiful, heart-wrenching story of the life many people live. Kathleen Glasgow tackles sensitive content; be cautious if you have suicidal thoughts or struggle with self-harm. It can be triggering or upsetting; it includes heavy topics such as drug abuse, sexual assault, self-harm, and alcoholism.  

Charlotte- Charlie Davis is a 17-year-old girl who has experienced much turmoil and more than anyone should, especially at that age. Charlie has selective mutism, a self-harm addiction, and a past with lots of abuse. She is admitted into a psychiatric hospital. After she gets discharged due to lack of medical insurance and no way to pay for treatment, she hops on a bus to Tucson, Arizona to try and start her new life.  

Ups and downs are something everyone has to deal with, but Charlie proves that any challenge can be overcome. Girl in Pieces has your attention piqued for the whole ride. Kathleen Glasgow does an amazing job of making the reader feel like they know Charlie. I can assure you; you will be thinking about Charlie and her journey all day! This book is so thick with emotion—from beginning to end.  

I believe the author is sending a message of survival: Charlie is a survivor. She survives homelessness, assault, drug use, mental illness and so much more. She is unbelievably strong and perseveres through everything. I strongly recommend reading this book—if you’re okay with this subject matter—I’ve definitely added this to my collection of favourite books. If you want a book that makes you feel—like, really feel, Girl in Pieces is definitely for you.  

Lily Hare is a student in grade 10 at Fredericton High School and, an aspiring future teacher. She loves dancing, music, naps, laughing, and travelling. While Lily may not be an ‘official writer’, throughout her life she has been told she is talented when it comes to creating magical stories.